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lina's avatar

wow just wow, beautiful writing thank you for sharing

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Jia's avatar

thank u💞

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Kenia Carima's avatar

you just broke my heart

beautiful absolutely beautiful

i love how you use the ocean and its waves as a background feeling

anyway i won’t forgive you for breaking my heart

but i’ll forever love you for helping me see there’s a future, a lovely future after a heart ache

thank you for sharing 💐

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k⋆'s avatar

it’s 9am and i’m already in tears

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O.D.X.S's avatar

oh god i’m gonna throw up this is too tragic please

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lana's avatar

oh goodness, this hit me hard. You should've held my hand before reminding this!🥹

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Samantha's avatar

Oh my god, I wish I could read it for the first time again and again to feel the way I felt right now, this is amazing writing

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Rana Ishfaq Toor's avatar

Amazing 👏. I love it. It is what I want to write ✍️ 😌

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Istha's avatar

The 'wow' i let out as I finish reading held so much i couldn't keep it in.

This is beyond beatiful.

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britney~ 🎀's avatar

wow i don’t even know what to say

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kay ✮'s avatar

i sent that too soon lmao but but i was gonna say you reached into parts of my hurt with this. indescribably beautiful piece, left speechless

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kay ✮'s avatar

reached into parts

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sofie's avatar

IM SOBBING SO BADDDDD oh my

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Elise's avatar

I cried. Thank you.

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nico's avatar

this one hurts a little… incredible writing

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Astrid Meléndez's avatar

“I wish we’d met later. When we were softer. When we knew how to stay.”

My heart💔 What a stunning piece of raw grieving.

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Jia's avatar

🥹🤗

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Emilio C's avatar

jesus christ this hit hard. <3

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